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Mark
2/8
Mark breakdown
- AO22/8
Paragraphs feedback
The third paragraph is incomplete and does not provide any analysis. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and concludes with a strong statement that ties back to the question. Consider discussing how both poets ultimately convey the relationship between daily life and the natural world.
What went well
The essay identifies key themes in both poems, such as the contrast between daily life and the natural world. It attempts to engage with the question by comparing the two works, which is a positive aspect of the response.
Even better if
To achieve a higher mark, the essay should provide a more detailed analysis of the poets' methods, including specific language, form, and structure. Additionally, ensuring that each paragraph is fully developed and clearly linked to the question will strengthen the overall argument.
Overall feedback
The essay demonstrates an understanding of the themes in both poems, but it lacks depth in analysis and comparison of the poets' methods. To improve, focus on providing specific examples and a more thorough exploration of how language and imagery create meaning in both works. A clearer structure with complete thoughts in each paragraph will enhance the overall quality of the response.