Essay and feedback

The essay attempts to identify some effects of the heat, such as its intensity and the impact it has on the character's actions. The mention of 'heat-waves' and 'heat lizards' introduces visual imagery that can engage the reader.

To achieve a higher mark, provide more detailed analysis of specific language choices and their effects. For instance, explain how the simile 'like flames' not only describes the lizards but also evokes a sense of danger and intensity associated with the heat. Additionally, ensure that all points are clearly articulated and relevant to the question.