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Chalcedonic, azure skies surrounded me. Slowly, the sun started to rise, grinning at me ecstatically. It's warm hues reflecting onto my face as the cold breeze kissed my skin. The sun shone vividly as a flock of magpies flew together gracefully gliding across the vast skies; their intricate movements brought a sense of suprise as they flew around.

Towering trees danced in the breeze, ballet dancers performing a piece they had been practicing for years. They performed in unison, whilst the scent of pine embraced my senses. Reflected upon them, the sun created alluring shadows, which resembled paintings made by a famous artist. They waved at me.

I waved back

Crunchy snow blanketed the forest, hiding what was previously underneath it. It glistened as if it were crystals on a necklace or glitter. My boots were
engulfed by the snow and were later
frozen into shape. Timidly glaring at me was a small rabbit, who ran hastily into the distance. Not wanting to intimidated the rabbit further, I decided to follow it with care, due to the fact it would have been able to sense my presence.

As I followed it, the forests true beaty was revealed. Detailed, mahogony designs covered the surrounding trees. An ombre sky uncovered itself to me, purple and yellow shades were clearly visilde. Small animals emerged from the behinds of trees and swiftly hid away. The smell of pine was so strong it lingered onto my taste buds.